Lovely chords; and that improvisation's great at about 00:45.
Lovely chords; and that improvisation's great at about 00:45.
HI Alxertion,
Thanks for the review.
I tried to make the strumming as cheerful as possible.
Hope you enjoy it.
Regards,
DwightFalcon
I myself like it. It doesn't have a lot of variation and it's a bit short, but other than that, nice work!
Those seem to be my weak points these days xP Thank you for the review!
There's a lot of blank space at the end. Also, those guitar riffs, for the whole song, fell "off-tune". The synths though make up for it and the beat's good, when the drums actually start; however, they're also very quiet. The drums should've been louder in my opinion.
thanks for listen. As i say in description its 2 differnet tracks i merged into 1. The beat alone is here
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/586475
I found an old guitar track i made and put it on top just to test out. I know its off but its a decent sound and idea. I think once i get my recording pc setup working ill make some new in synce guitar songs combined with beats lol.
check the beat alone if u like it let me know cheers
Sounds awesome; the chords you've used are fitting for the song; I don't feel that it's repetitive either, which is great! I just think the ending's very sudden though. Other than that, great work!
Thank you. I think the same thing about the end, but I don't know what could be better :L
The feeling that this song inspires for me is sadness mixed with hope; nice work on it!
Thanks a million, Alxertion!
It truly sounds like a silly background music; reminds me of the genre Stride Piano.
thank you very much. glad i achieved what i was attempting :3
This song reminded me a bit of Caramelldansen, really; that aside, though, nice song!
Haha that song, I used to love it. Thanks!
It feels very tense and it gives a sort of unsafe feeling; the feeling you've tried to achieve, basically. And it also sounds nice!
Thanks dude !
In the beginning, even though it feels tense, the chorus feels like it's relieving some of the pressure. Just like a main character prepares to head off somewhere. When the chorus ends, it feels as if a character started heading towards that certain place, which is dark, full of mystery. Then, at 3:30, he discovers something and stops for a moment..Well, that's what this song inspired for me :D
Thanks for sharing that! That's awesome, haha! I LOVE hearing how my songs are interpreted differently. =P
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