The overall track is nice, from a point of view. When I'm listening to it, what I think you aimed for (judging by the tags you added: happy/upbeat) was accomplished. At the beginning and about a minute and 20 secs into the track, the keyboard synth is barely audible because the beat and harmony is too loud. I listened to the original track that you remixed for a comparison and from my opinion, your remix improved it. After listening to the original I agreed to the reviews that said the voices were obnoxious because they were too loud and you took care of that. Lovely work overall.